Comments on: Maradonia and the Seven Bridges

By: Vic

Vic — Fri, 04 Dec 2009 18:05:25 +0000

This girl has no talent whatsoever. I am scared for her. She’s fifteen but she writes like a five year old. Dude, what are her parents thinking spending money on this crap. I weep for the trees, the poor things.

By: Roarri

Roarri — Tue, 27 Oct 2009 13:59:09 +0000

That’s the most revolting piece of crap I’ve ever read in my entire life. *Dies* LOL

By: JD

JD — Fri, 23 Oct 2009 03:51:38 +0000

o woops i said that twice. sorry
i suppose her parents are all, “that’s righ tmy little angel, ” and “what a champ! yungest novelist she is so gud” and “she is pehenomenal, oh yes she is arent you? XOXOXOX”

By: JD

JD — Fri, 23 Oct 2009 03:49:51 +0000

she keeps spamming herself as well, which is also weird. i cant believe she just doesnt think of the consequnces of being a idiot to the whole internet community

By: JD

JD — Fri, 23 Oct 2009 03:48:12 +0000

wow im sorry but gloria really needs to take some english classes. but shes homeschooled so wut can u do. everythings cliche, nothing fits, there’s no tense moments, and its a flat read. i had to pull my self through. she should stop gloating, as its wrong and even more wrong when what u have written is crappy.

By: Maradonia and the Seven Bridges « The Pretentious Scribe

Maradonia and the Seven Bridges « The Pretentious Scribe — Wed, 20 May 2009 17:52:27 +0000

[...] Disgusting, no? I found the file where I saved the first forty pages at school, when I should have been revising – rather like now – and thus I offer you a few of my favourite parts. It’s too long to post it all here. In fact… I’ve set up a page with it all on, found here. [...]