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Requiem for a Dream

August 31, 2008 Mark Leave a comment

That is an incredible name, no? Requiem–lament for the dead. I came across it after spending ages looking for that blasted theme tune, you know, the one that plays in the background of every memorable trailer? Lux Aeterna or The Eternal Light. Anyhow, I find myself listening to that more and more these days. Not sure why, to be honest. It’s a reasonably depressing theme yet full of hope.

Two Characters

Two Characters

Requiem for a Dream is most memorable by the music from the film, based on a recent book of the same name. It sees the hopes and dreams of four amibitious people destroyed as their drug habits escalate, and some are forced into less desirable positions in society. I have not seen the film myself, but by good intention I would like to. It seems similar to Ever Wayward (name pending) and the type of deep, symbolic, pretentious crap I write. Aedomir sees his dream to be free with his companions crushed in a split second.

My ramble for today, but seriously, great name.

Requiem for a Dream

Requiem for a Dream

#1 Evil on Earth: Analysing Literature

August 21, 2008 Mark Leave a comment

Someone said this recently on YWS, and I agree. Completely.

Literature isn’t meant to be analysed! When Shakespeare wrote The Tempest he didn’t think,“Ya know, I think another usage of an extended metaphor to broaden how good I am before the 12 syllable iambic pentameter would be great.

OK!

Well, perhaps I just need a reason to procrastinate. I don’t know. But it’s just what I hate in school; is it just to fill the curriculum, or what? If Shakespeare truly did that, just to piss off the descendants in 500 years, then guess what?

I believed in you, and you let me down!

I believed in you, and you let me down!

I should really get back to my English coursework. Oh, by the way, not that anyone cares but I got an A* in my ICT GCSE (how?)!

Rhyming

August 21, 2008 Mark Leave a comment

I am a great poem. I shall emphasise:

Roses are red,
violets are blue,
most poems rhyme,
but this one doesn’t.

Poopstream – Da Wannabe Poet?

July 15, 2008 Mark Leave a comment

No, I’m not changing this blog title to: “Confessions of a teenage poet” because writer covers it, and you ain’t seen nothing ’til you’ve written Poopstream.  But what is Poopstream? Some believe it is a work of beauty, between the lyrical temptations of Tolkien and Seamus Heaney but I myself see as a gateway to a new dimension. I write Poopstream quite often, perhaps to fill my lunch hours or even to take the mick out of Miss W, my English teacher who insists on annotating stuff for no reason. But yes, Poopstream is a collection of random sentence structures (typos never changed) and I see what magnificence I have come up with after a minute or so. I forgot to save what I wrote today and I can’t find the hard-copy but here’s what I knocked up a while back, I call it ‘Biglet’:

There was this dalek right,
No left however right,
who was like omg I’m a horse faced machete.
However
One day a man named
EVIL
Decided to be best to stab
FLEMENGO s l o w l y
And died cus my machine is
A machination of the peanut kind tribe who ride to France at
07709355092-miles per hour in km.
Seventy two, Robert, seventy two, berty,
And a man who claimed he was a French pickle.

But it was three day
Upon the eve of night
That the colour was a figure—
Visit our HQ upon sunset—
The address is featured below in a fashion magazine—
Her.

Not my best, in fact one of my worst. My favourite was the first one I ever made, quite funny actually. Something to do with joining us for free at fattyland@gmail.com.

Meh. Perhaps I should annotate these, because according to my English teacher, all poetry has meaning:

There was this dalek right,
No left however right,

This symbolises the forever change between decisions–from the point of view of a man, a deluded being who cannot understand the concept of his livelihood. The mentioning of ‘Dalek’ implies a sentimental purpose behind it, and that it is not capitalised signifies the communist rebellion of ‘42.

Visit our HQ upon sunset—
The address is featured below in a fashion magazine—
Her.

This shows how the media influences childhoods across the globe, from war to to night (sunset indicating the faliure to progress).

That’s right, I Poopstream analysis.

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Music & Politics

July 11, 2008 Mark 9 comments

Anyhow, when I’m listening to music I also find some ease in writing–oh, and I seem to live chewing Trident chewing gum too. Don’t know why. Back the music, depending on what mood I’m in I will play a song to match it, so I go the extreme and being writing in that tone. Listening to Annie Lennox’s ‘Into the West’ gives me reason for sad endings and the Rohirrim Fanfair let’s me imagine heroic battles–desperation?

Moving on…

Has anyone seen the I’m Voting Republican video? I think it’s hilarious, and what makes it all the better is that I live in the UK and hence don’t care much for the presidential race, ’cause they really are a race. If you haven’t seen it, then try it now:

The sad thing is, it almost reflects the mess that the US is in at the moment, and has been for quite some time. I can’t be bothered to go into poliicts, considering it’s 23:15 and I’m tired… Anyway, watch it now!

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I Write Essays in my Freetime

July 5, 2008 Mark 2 comments

No, not really… not as such anyway. Last night when I was lying in bed, I realised why I was not writing–the thing is, I had no idea what I wanted to happen in the book. My view was too vague and even my plans were just bullet points–so I started my outline. I call it an essay because it’s around a paragraph a chapter, and it based completely on my book–except no one will be grading it and I can relax. There’s no rush. At this point I’m still writing for myself, for as of yet my deadlines extend to around the 12th of forever. Of course, it will do me no good thinking about that.

But also I tend to spend more time procrastinating than enything else. I mean, I have set up a writing community but it takes so long to advertise and manage–it’s like a 24-hour job that I have to pay to do. Anyway, it’s a nightmare. You can find links to it here, at Novelism.

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Confession #1 – Words Saved Me

July 1, 2008 Mark 1 comment

Writers have ever sought to teach us their many fabulous ways of the pen, through yes, you’ve guessed it: quotes. I hope to take a look at what some of the most inspirational figures of writing have told us, and how we can relate with them. Never have our stories only needed one, two or even a thousand things. A story is like homework, it never ends.

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Determination:

“And by the way, everything in life is writable about if you have the outgoing guts to do it, and the imagination to improvise.  The worst enemy to creativity is self-doubt.” ~Sylvia Plath

Sylvia Plath offers us something very clear: determination. If you have no self-confidence, I am sorry, but you may as well not bother. Think of it like a plant:

Flower = Writing Style, they can be wonderful and provide interest, making something boring, beautiful.

Stem = Plot, it holds the structure together, without it there would be no plant, no story.

Leaves = Characters, they feed the story, but too many can ruin and overcrowd it.

Roots = Determination, it is all very well having hundreds of wonderful plants, colourful and majestic, but if the roots are dead, it will never flourish. The water flows through it, the flower thriving because of it, namely determination.

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Don’t think, just write:

“I’m not a very good writer, but I’m an excellent rewriter.”  ~James Michener

It may be the case, that some people can write symphonies without thinking, but more so the fact that we can beat them by using a brain. There is no point worrying about how bad you’re writing is, first time you stick it down on paper. I mean, think about it. Your first draft is always appalling, or rather, never as good as the second draft. It takes far more focus and determination to finish the first draft, than to rewrite it. It is like a house; get the bricks into place before you paint it.

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Show, don’t tell:

“Don’t tell me the moon is shining; show me the glint of light on broken glass.”  ~Anton Chekhov

How many times have you been told to show us what is going on? This is where it gets controversial. Think of two writers; let’s say William Wordsworth and J.R.R Tolkien. Wordsworth’s main character will roar with cries in his poems, struggling with the grief-storms of modern day horrors, whereas Frodo, weeps. Yet they are both fantastic, because they get across their meaning so fantastically with pen and paper. What works for you? I wish I could help you more than that, but from there, it is up to you.

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Imagine:

“Write down the thoughts of the moment.  Those that come unsought for are commonly the most valuable.”  ~Francis Bacon

Just think about that. Your duty is to tell your heart, not your brain. If you want to have a go at that, try speedwriting, or just mumbling to yourself at the window. Sit on your bed, and recite the entire lot of your story to yourself. What sounds stupid, what’s irrelevant, and most importantly, what is missing? Through your reclusive ramblings you will find that you will be writing some things that actual surprise you. This twines in nicely with the Don’t think, just write quote. Some of the best stories written come from NaNoWriMo, where if you think, you lose!

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Ignore:

“Do not put statements in the negative form.
And don’t start sentences with a conjunction.
If you reread your work, you will find on rereading that a
great deal of repetition can be avoided by rereading and editing.
Never use a long word when a diminutive one will do.
Unqualified superlatives are the worst of all.
De-accession euphemisms.
If any word is improper at the end of a sentence, a linking verb is.
Avoid trendy locutions that sound flaky.
Last, but not least, avoid clichés like the plague.”
~William Safire, “Great Rules of Writing”

Don’t you just love this one? The irony is so powerful here, and yet you read it, yes? I am a strong believer in this, and the fact that if you listen to all the people who have a go at you, saying Don’t do this it never works. Why? Because this is your story, and your flowers are individual to you. Otherwise, we might as well be numbers.

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To conclude:

There are so many people who seek to change what, when and how you write, but there is only one thing to it – only one thing to mix all those ingredients: you.

The Story of Three Books

June 30, 2008 Mark Leave a comment

The Strange Case of Doctor Jekyll and Mr Hyde

I read this book for my English project – or the most part anyway – a while back. Just recently however, I decided to pick it back up again, and read the final chapter. I must say, I enjoyed it far more than I thought I would, considering the horrifically slow start. Actually, it was one of the slowest books I have ever read but I just enjoyed the story as much as anything.

The plot, admittedly, was hardly a work of heart if you ask me. I thought it was quite predictable and simple–quite frankly I saw just a guy who drank stuff to become a madman, but I guess I was just drawn in by the way it was framed. It was more of a novella as opposed to a novel, yet the simplicity in my opinion was by far its greatest strength.

The writing style on the other hand, was far from simply. He seems to take a long time to say anything, but I admire his strong word choices. What I love is that he has very little – if any – suspense and it just goes to show you need not have a cliffhanger every page for a winner! Sure, Stevenson isn’t the best writer ever but for me I felt it was a great piece of classical, British literature!

The Book Thief

A few days ago I finished The Book Thief. I was just sitting there in bed when I finished it, just saying to myself wow, wow, wow, wow, wow… when I finished. So ye, I thought it was pretty good. As soon as I finished, I decided that Tolkien was now my second favourite author (I thought I would never say that), since Markus Zusak as snatched first place.The Book Thief

It was an incredible story, and the fact that it portrayed so many moods–from shock, fear and hate to love, warmth, compassion and humour. I never, never cry at books or films, but at the end I felt a tear well in my eye. I won’t ruin the plot, but people you had begun to get to know through the entire book, died in a single sentence. But still, it was written so brilliantly–the style was far beyond unique.

The tale sees a young German girl, Liesel Meminger, in WWII, Nazi Germany. The plot is incredibly complicated, so I won’t ruin it, but this is a real recommendation. I stayed up three hours in bed reading it. I was absorbed. And I mean it, I use the italics sparingly.

Never have I called an author perfect – nor do I intend to – but I tell you know, that Zusak has some talent in him. At the start, when I saw it was narrated by Death, I thought stick with, stick with it. And I did.

I am Legend

Alright, so I finished this last night. Having watched the film and having an urge to read this, I bought it and set about chapter one. I wasn’t especially impressed, it was a sort of mediocre book. There were a lot of info-dumps and the range emotion was pretty much limited–something I would have would be crucial when a man is the last person on the planet.

‘Twas very dark, but I felt as the reader, I just couldn’t love the characters. The ending, undeniably, was great and very powerful but the weak plot devices led to a very long middle, and a random ending. Matheson did an alright job considering the short length of the novel/novella but since I can’t bothered to say anything else, I just thought I’d say it was alright. Of course, this was not meant to be a number one best-seller, but I thought the fact that he was alone was just not brought to the surface, a lacking novel but a believable one too.

What do I say?

June 29, 2008 Mark Leave a comment

“The Road goes ever on and on down from the door where it began. Now far ahead the Road has gone, and I must follow, if I can, pursuing it with eager feet, until it joins some larger way where many paths and errands meet. And whither then? I cannot say.” ~ J.R.R. Tolkien

Whenever I write, I think of that.

You know, it’s true how quotes can be taken as a word of ramble, or genuine symbolism. When I sit down and when I open Chapter One, I am thinking to myself about this Lord of the Rings message. Sure, it might just be about a few hobbits but really the same message applies.

Times will be long and hard and you may not know where to go, but the path is before you.

I have been writing my novel, Ever Wayward, since around January, and have only just started my blog! I know, it’s terrible, but hey!

Anyhow, my name is Mark, and I live to write. To give you a bit of an insight:

Currently, I am at around 25, 000 words, so it is going very slowly at the moment. However, I have decided that deadlines and word count targets just worry you, and inevitably slow you down. I am in the process of rewriting it, so, anyway.

My main character’s name is Aedomir, and he is an exile who is desperately trying to reunite with his companions, but has been thrown into a world of power. I enjoy writing high fantasy, but I am interested to try a more humorous genre, and develop my writing further. I enjoyed writing with music to get me in my creative mood.

At the moment, I am reviewing the prospect of various pieces I am writing. I don’t know whether to go back to Ever Wayward, which is slowly falling apart or not. If I do, it will involve a complete rewrite of it. Or, there is my other story, Ancestry. It is very unique, but maybe a bit too challenging for me.

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